Miles nailed it, needs to be more bold, and have some art to it. Once you figure it out, Let me know and I'll quote you to print it. I suggest not getting to fancy on your own. Sometimes it costs more to make it a printable file than just having us make it form the start. Miles Help Vance by designing and I make miles file printable and then printed and installed it for Vance, and others too. Must be in vector and must not be a continuous line. Keep me posted, good luck
If you want the hook in there you need to fade it out more as a back ground. Right now its the in your face primary eye catcher. I would fade it, shrink it a little and bold the Genie Aye over the top of it giving it a true background affect.